Everybody had a look at the paragraph presented for correction. I hope everyone tried to make the corrections. Below is the paragraph as it was presented. Below that is the same paragraph with the corrections. Compare the two and make sure that you understand why the corrections were made.
Later today, I attend the high school graduation of my sister. She
will finish her course in high school last week. She will be a good
student while she will be in high school so I think she is good
student in college. My sister is a great students because she
usually reading books to learn more. She never forget her homework
because she wanted to be perfect. While I write this to you, my
sister visited with my mother who will guide her when she start
school in first grade.
Later today, I will attend the high school graduation of my sister. She finished her course in high school last week. She was a good student while she was in high school so I think she will be a good student in college. My sister is a great student because she usually reads books to learn more. She never forgets her homework because she wants to be perfect. While I am writing this to you, my sister is visiting with my mother who guided her when she started school in first grade.
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Barbara92106
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